Her red cloak swirled around her, the anguished cry of a male catching her attention. Everyone knows this forest is dark so what compelled this man to break the unspoken vow of entering? <What compelled her to break the unspoken vow of entering?
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What if they were causing the trouble all along? I would basically force the readers to learn to love characters and then reveal their true evil and make them wonder how they could love something so diabolically bad.
Writing kids part 2 (Not sorry for inserting a fandom, but an example of the sound-simplification is Alas Ramus. She's two, and names like 'Alciel' or 'Lucifer' are too much-instead you get 'Al-cell' and 'Looshifa')