Make the book sum up. And then on the last page kill the most lovable character by the main protagonist and the protagonist likes it.
This is the best advice on writing dialogue I've seen tbh. Also short and easy to understand!
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This is good. Although I can't say I fully agree - I tend to like showing feelings, but only to a certain extent I suppose. I do agree with always showing the emotions, though.
ok but reader have u ever consider that it's fun to describe the characters eye color in detail for the writer, no? ok
I have issues with some of the information about swords in the top, but LOVE the second half.
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Haha that Satan's publisher on the end XD Yah thanks for telling all the future authors how to break my heart XD
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