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And the only way to make it work is completely own it. You cannot second-guess your system or else the reader will too. You can give it the strangest explanation, but write it like you own it.

And the only way to make it work is completely own it. You cannot second-guess your system or else the reader will too. You can give it the strangest explanation, but write it like you own it.

Her limp body bled all over her lover and her arch enemy the super hero. She had fallen onto a tall shard of metal, piercing every major organ a human being possessed

I like the time loop dialogue

I like the time loop dialogue

SO MUCH LAKE

SO MUCH LAKE

dude! your rent is way past due! I'm sorry but If you cant pay soon your going to have to find another bed.

You tossed your rent bill across the room in frustration and it went under your bed. A minute later, a grotesque claw pushed the bill back out with a wad of cash.<<< and then gently place a plate of cookies or something under the bed

I stare at you. You glance over and pass a note. 'Why did you do that???' It said. I passed it back. 'I'll tell you why later. And you better explain yourself.' I had added.

I stare at you. You glance over and pass a note. 'Why did you do that???' It said. I passed it back. 'I'll tell you why later. And you better explain yourself.' I had added.